12/20/2023 0 Comments Communigate pro fairpointAs such, nothing important should be in the lead only - since it is a summary, it should all be repeated in the body of the article itself. The lead should be an accessible and inviting overview of the whole article.Looking at WP:LEAD the lead is not supposed to be more than four paragraphs long, but this is five.There is one disambiguation link, to polymorphism, which needs to be fixed - see toolbox on this page.I would treat the FAC as another review - I would look at every point raised there and address it too.I corrected one error - the article lead used to read " Hershey shared the 1969 Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine with Chase for their “discoveries concerning the genetic structure of viruses.”" but Hershey shared the prize that year with Delbrück and Luria, and Chase never received any part of a Nobel Prize.I also think it needs some work before it will pass at WP:GAN, so here are some suggestions for improvement with GAN in mind, and FAC eventually. Ruhrfisch comments: Thanks for your work on this article - it looks pretty good, especially for some of your first work here, but as you already know it is not yet ready for FAC. I've listed this article for peer review because we are trying to gain insight into how the article could be formatted better for use on WIkipedia. This peer review discussion has been closed. 92 List of township-level divisions of Hebei.91 List of goaltenders who have scored a goal in an NHL game. 81.1 Review from - Lil_ ℧niquℇ №1 (in-progress).76 List of hill forts and ancient settlements in Somerset.74 List of scientists whose names are used as SI units.69 Piers Gaveston, 1st Earl of Cornwall.65 Holy Wood (In the Shadow of the Valley of Death).59 Movie production incentives in the United States.55 Direct lobbying in the United States.48 List of World Heritage Sites in Madagascar.42 1962 National League tie-breaker series.32.1 Comments from The Rambling Man - a quick run through the obvious stuff I'd point out at FLC.22 General Dynamics F-16 Fighting Falcon.16 Macomb County Board of Commissioners.5.4 Historical accuracy and inspiration.
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